Pass 2 critique 80.0/100 (honest-stretch reach app, converged near ceiling).
Includes accuracy fix: Swisscom Data Mesh reframed from sole-build to
company-wide migration contributed to (hedged verbs); orchestration +
reference-architecture surfaced; removed -ing bullet trailers; CL trimmed
to 300 words with matching ownership hedge.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.7 <noreply@anthropic.com>