All three Tier 1 items from the critique, all honestly available, no
claim altered.
The R2 vocabulary now appears where R2 is actually evidenced: the SW-7
bullet carries ingestion and lifecycle, and SW-1 carries transformation
and storage. R2 was the single core responsibility scored Direct, and
the document had been proving it in substance while missing it in the
JD's own words. SW-2 now names the Oracle/Kafka/Python/Teradata estate a
distributed system he operates - not one he designed, which stays a gap.
The second skills line is relabelled "Distributed systems" and names
distributed databases explicitly, closing the fifth preferred-technology
hit that Phase 0 counted as Direct but the resume never actually wrote.
Recorded what was deliberately not added, because raising keyword
coverage is exactly where a later run would be tempted to overreach:
"scalable" is an unverified scale claim, and SDK, high-throughput,
data-intensive, simulation, model development and self-service have no
canonical evidence. Verified still absent after the edit.
Scope kept to what was approved. The user said "tier 1 fixes", so the
Tier 2 headline retitle - "Production Data Platforms on AWS", the line
most likely to draw the opening challenge from a technical reviewer -
was left in place for them to decide.
Validator PASS with zero warnings: the 58% cadence warning cleared as a
side effect, because restructuring two bullets with em-dashes broke the
comma-list pattern the checker keys on. Still exactly 2 pages, zero
overfull/underfull boxes, PDF re-inspected.
Critique marked STALE - it scored the pre-edit document.
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