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feat(sbb): critique the package and apply its Tier 1 fix

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Critique per critique_framework.md: hard gate PASS, Evidence Fit 79/100
(Core, unchanged — a document cannot move candidate-role fit), Document
Quality 90/100, Channel Weak but uniquely upgradeable. Claim audit clean
across all 13 bullets; no Tier 1 truth findings.

The skill's own spec asks for a single 8-dimension score including a
Publications weight, which contradicts critique_framework.md and CLAUDE.md
("never collapse them into one optimistic score"). Followed CLAUDE.md and
recorded the conflict — the skill definition looks stale relative to the
July rewrite.

Tier 1 finding and fix: the JD names Abfrageleistungsoptimierung in a
required line and the document had zero occurrences of "query", despite
canonical support sitting in BS-2's 3L variant. BS-2 now reads "tuning
query performance for analysis teams working with…" and the Pipelines
skills line gains "query performance tuning". Also surfaced "agile" in
SW-3, whose canonical 2L variant records "in an agile DevOps team" and
whose absence left the JD's second required line unaddressed.

Deliberately NOT applied: the API term. claims.json SW-7 records only
"onboard source systems" and SW-2's ingestion is Oracle to Kafka, so
adding it would be vocabulary substitution rather than evidence. Left
open pending user confirmation.

Re-verified after the edit: validator PASS, forbidden-token scan PASS,
compile PASS at 2 pages, both pages re-rendered and inspected. Longest
bullet 34 words, still under the flag threshold. Document Quality 90 to
92 on relevance/terminology.

Still not submitted — held pending the Anforderungsniveau K comp answer.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01WpMtWFtYkGkjSMShuTgXiB
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| Session | Status | Next Command |
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| SBB — Data Engineer (m/w/d), Asset Management Infrastrukturanlagen, **Bern** (Job ID 103755) | **RESUME DONE 2026-08-21 — not submitted, held pending the comp answer.** 2pp English resume, 13 bullets, validator PASS. Evidence Fit **79/100 (Core, lower end)**, hard gate **PASS** — the title-defining capability (build/operate cloud data pipelines and governed data products) is Direct and current, unlike the AWS FDE NO-GO. Best practical fit in the log: **Bern-based, German-language, no relocation, EU citizen + B permit**. Real strength cluster for the *vorausschauende Wartung* purpose — Bosch fab sensor/process data, ELK/Kafka anomaly detection, containerized ML inference, plus the condition-monitoring thesis. **Two open risks, both level/comp not fit:** (1) **Anforderungsniveau K** is a capped GAV band and the figures are not public — must be asked, not researched; (2) the seat reads **lateral or below** current Staff + Component Owner scope (same shape as the declined BKW). Named gaps: Snowflake, dbt, Argo Workflows, Helm, Power BI, Spring Boot, Angular — all non-canonical, survivable only because the JD prefixes the stack list with "z. B.". **Cover letter: NO — SBB explicitly waives it.** Channel: posting names **Andri Wienandts, People Leader, +41 79 364 62 53** — the first published warm entry point in the entire log. | Call Andri Wienandts on the K band + design scope, then `/critique output/SBB_DataEngineer_AssetMgmt/session_sbb_data_engineer_asset_mgmt.md` |
| SBB — Data Engineer (m/w/d), Asset Management Infrastrukturanlagen, **Bern** (Job ID 103755) | **PACKAGE DONE 2026-08-21 — not submitted, held pending the comp answer.** 2pp English resume (13 bullets, validator PASS) + critique: **Document Quality 92/100** (90 at critique, +2 after Edit 1), hard gate PASS, no Tier 1 truth findings, **no outstanding fixes**. No cover letter — SBB waives it. Evidence Fit **79/100 (Core, lower end)**, hard gate **PASS** — the title-defining capability (build/operate cloud data pipelines and governed data products) is Direct and current, unlike the AWS FDE NO-GO. Best practical fit in the log: **Bern-based, German-language, no relocation, EU citizen + B permit**. Real strength cluster for the *vorausschauende Wartung* purpose — Bosch fab sensor/process data, ELK/Kafka anomaly detection, containerized ML inference, plus the condition-monitoring thesis. **Two open risks, both level/comp not fit:** (1) **Anforderungsniveau K** is a capped GAV band and the figures are not public — must be asked, not researched; (2) the seat reads **lateral or below** current Staff + Component Owner scope (same shape as the declined BKW). Named gaps: Snowflake, dbt, Argo Workflows, Helm, Power BI, Spring Boot, Angular — all non-canonical, survivable only because the JD prefixes the stack list with "z. B.". **Cover letter: NO — SBB explicitly waives it.** Channel: posting names **Andri Wienandts, People Leader, +41 79 364 62 53** — the first published warm entry point in the entire log. | Call Andri Wienandts (+41 79 364 62 53) on the K band + design scope → then `/edit-resume` for the Tier 1 query-performance fix and submit, or close as NO-GO on comp |
| AWS (AWS EMEA SARL, Switzerland Branch) — Senior Forward Deployed Engineer, Zürich (job 10504263) | **CLOSED — NO-GO 2026-08-18** at the Phase 0 gate. Evidence Fit **69/100** (Adjacent). Minimum-qual gate passed (all 4 Basic Quals Direct) but the *title-defining* capability — customer embedding — is a Gap that `claims.json` globally forbids claiming, and R2 multi-agent/retrieval is a second Gap. User declined: **69 is below the fit bar worth spending a package on.** Consistent with revealed behaviour — every application actually submitted scored **77.5–89**; nothing below 75 has ever been sent. **No cohort slot consumed (Adjacent stays 1/2).** Phase 0 analysis retained in the session file for reuse if a better-fitting AWS req appears. | Done — no package built |
| Google — Forward Deployed Engineer III, Google Cloud GTM (French, German), Zürich (req 78350205438567110) | **CLOSED — NOT PROCEEDING 2026-08-18.** Phase 0 was done (Evidence Fit 67/100, hard gate PASS) but user declined to proceed after **two Google rejections** (Merchant Data Science, Business Home): the bar is now that a Google req must fit *very* well to be worth a third attempt, and this one was Adjacent with an agent-orchestration Gap. **Frees the Adjacent cohort slot (back to 1/2).** Phase 1 never started. | Done — do not reopen without a materially stronger Google req |
| SDU Center for Energy Informatics, Odense DK — PhD, Theme 2 Predictive Maintenance & Asset Management of Smart Energy Networks (job 4159) | **CLOSED — NOT PROCEEDING 2026-08-18.** Enquiry email to Prof. Bo Nørregaard Jørgensen (sent 2026-08-02) went unanswered for 16 days; user dismissed the idea. Genuine thesis fit (vibration condition monitoring, RBR+ANN hybrid) but the blockers were never the documents — 2 letters of recommendation 13 years out of academia, and DKK 37,075/mo ≈ CHF 56k against a 180k bar. Deadline was 2026-08-20. | Done — no further action |